How's this sound? *spoilers*

Ok, so my English teacher just set the BEST creative 글쓰기 piece ever!!!! I have to continue the end of a film, which is basically 팬 fiction, right?

My chosen film is Thor: The Dark World. I haven't finished 또는 handed this in yet, but I'd like to know what people think. It's in Loki's perspective, so don't judge me too harshly.



As I watched my dear brother leave the room, I revealed the illusion that hid my face. I rose from the 왕좌, 왕위 I had so deeply desired for as long as I could remember, and made my way to the darkest part of my long forgotten home. The dungeons were a vile and vicious place, so vile it was hard to believe I had once resided there. As I passed by, each criminal in every cell stood to greet their king. Except one. I turned to face the vermin in the cell, and recognised his face instantly. He was tall and handsome, yet dark and mysterious.