Jemi Article: Oh no!! I'm in 사랑 with a pirate! A Jemi Story Episode 1

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Oh no!! I'm in 사랑 with a pirate! A Jemi Story Episode 1

posted by jemifanlover908

STARRING:
Demi Lovato as Princess Demetria Lovato(17)
Joe Jonas as Captain Joseph Jonas(20)
Nick Jonas as Pirate Nick Grey(19)
Selena Gomez as Selena Lovato (17)
Miley Cyrus as Miley Lovato(20)
Kevin Jonas as Kevin Lovato(21)
Patrick Lovato as King Patrick Lovato(45)
~AND MANY MORE~Heres the story~
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Author's P.O.V.~
Once upon a time lived a girl named Demetria. She was soon going to be the 퀸 of Genovia. Demetria 로스트 her mother at birth.She has a very amazing dad.She is 17 years old.
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Demi's P.O.V.~
I was walking through the village on a very lovely day.When all of the sudden I heard a call from one of the gaurds.
Gaurd:Princess Demetria 당신 must hide.The kingdom is under attack 의해 pirates.
Demi:Oh dear.Tell father that I'm going to hide immeaditly.Thank you!
I quickly ran into the castle.I grabbed my dad's sword and got under the bed.
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Joe's P.O.V.~
We were at in kingdom of Genovia.By "we" I meant my crew and I.You see I'm the captain on my ship called Crestulina.Together my crew and I were the Crestulina Pirates.
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Author's P.O.V.~
As Joseph and his crew was slaughtering guards who stood in their way he caught the glimpse of someone.It was a beautiful girl in the 성 grabbing a sword a sword and hiding under the bed.I was guessing that she was the princess when Nick Grey,my bestfriend and is apart of the crew, said "Go and get her." I slowly walked to the 성 killing the gaurds that stood in my way.
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Demi's P.O.V.~
I heard someone come into the castle.I slowly got out from under the 침대 with my dad's sword.I walked out the door and bumped into someone.When I turned around I froze.There infront of me was a...
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To be continued~
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Plz comment.Even if ther mean.Alsotell me if u want to be in the story.U just have to tell me ur name and i will put u in my story.THANKZZZ
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sincerely,
Jemifanlover908 (kara)

angeleyes18 and chonny like this

Gussielee11 Hey Kara! It's me. This is an awesome script. I fell in love with the dialogue and the storyline is very intriguing. However, reading this and not knowing your style, is it a script or a novel/story? This is put together like a script (episode guide, acting out, drama) I honestly think that this is a perfect script. I just want to make sure that's where you are going with this. Another thing that I would suggest is spell check for those 2-3 errors (I'm a snob for that kind of stuff!) Honestly, though, it's what is inside that counts (plot, storyline, character development) and that was phenomenal. Just remember style and making your sentences interesting, non repetitive (there were a few repeated thoughts, and not with the exact idea but with the articles and pronouns--example: "She has a very amazing dad.She is 17 years old.". Repeated "she". Find other words and styles of sentences and this is perfection. Any questions, you know how to contact me. ~Augusta

jemifanlover908 thanks .the mistakes are probably because i did this at 3:oo in the morning and i was getting sleppy i swear i saw black stars while making this.ANd yes it is written like a script!!!

DemiJones Interesting storyline. I can't wait to read more.

jemifanlover908 thanks DemiJones.I will post more soon

chonny i love it!