Anyone interested in helping a budding author?

Hello!! I'm 글쓰기 a book on wattpad and I wanted to know if any of 당신 would like to read and critique/leave 코멘트 on it. I 업로드 a chapter a 일 and there are currently 10. If you're looking for a good read about a girl in the afterlife, please check it out!! :D
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Thanks!!
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