Is this good?

He suffered for years

My eyes are filled with tears

But unable to cry

I stood 의해 and watched him die

I hated myself for not trying to lend a hand

But I didn’t know what to do

He suffered from an addiction each 일

I didn’t say anything and I pretended like everything was okay

I knew for so long That there was something wrong

As he grew 더 많이 distant from me

Then that 일 when I saw the pictures of him getting high

It was a sight that I couldn’t bare to see

So I made myself believe that he couldn’t

And he wouldn’t Hurt me that way I was living a lie

Months passed 의해

And finally he came clean

And promised 당신 would quit

Though he kept it

And it hurts me to say

The addiction is what killed him

I all I could do is pray

That God won’t take my dad away

But He did

God relieved him from his suffering

I want him here with me

But when I saw him there

He was so free from the pain

I couldn’t wish him back, so he could suffer again

당신 had an addiction

And it kills me to say

The addiction is why you’re not alive today
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silvaria_fan23 posted over a year ago
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...you dont have a dad either..
PuNkRoCk123 posted over a year ago
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that was so butiful.......im so sorry u 로스트 your dad but the poem was breath taking and so buitiful
meranda123 posted over a year ago
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I started to cry :'(
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amethyst44 said:
really good. has much depth into it. even though its a poem, i wish there was 더 많이 to it. i liked it so much i want to read more!! again, very good. is this from your own experience?
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Yess. my best friend od'd with heroin
E-rock posted over a year ago
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oh how sad :( a very good poem i think (he?) would be very proud that 당신 did this for him.
amethyst44 posted over a year ago
XxemoeeveexX said:
Astounding...
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scarsdntfade said:
Wow this poem is really good and im sorry to hear about your friend. That must have been horrible for 당신 to go through that.
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princess829 said:
It's awesome. The only part that I don't really quite understand is that if it's about your best friend then why does it say: That God won’t take my dad away? Just wondering if thats a typo 또는 something? Just curious.
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Yeah i 로스트 my dad too so i messed it up :\
E-rock posted over a year ago
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Oh, well thats ok. I feel really bad for you-my 심장 goes out to 당신
princess829 posted over a year ago
leahp12 said:
this is relly good!
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dearjohnlOv3r23 said:
yeah i like it. e-rock::
>hey, um im in the process of making a website its going to be called WhatsMilenaSayinNow? anyone is welcome there. If 당신 have any guy trouble, family problems. ANYTHING! im there for you. whatever 당신 tell me stays between 당신 and I no one will know. Im a great girl that would 사랑 to give 당신 advice. please help me make this website a success! thanks. <3milena.
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and i 로스트 my mom when i was little. so i can feel u brother.
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TOTALFan said:
Wickedness, I write poems myself, this is 의해 far the best I've read from a not famous poet.
I hope 더 많이 people notice ur talent.
U feel the poem.
U know it.
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kwlski4ever said:
It's awesome =)
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meranda123 said:
wow thats..... like realy.... wow u are very poetic it was buitiful, im very sorry u 로스트 your dad. i dont no what to say.
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