ZERG1994s NEWEST MAYBE GREATEST POEM YET! !-read it now

Rain, rain go away
BEcause of 당신 the pain will stay
Slit my throat, cu out my heart,
Leave me here, tear it apart.

Poisen tears stream down my face,
My 심장 beats at a steady pace,
As I try to stand again;
Alone and standing in the rain.

I dont 당신 need 당신 anymore...
Is what I think while tears pour,
I hate 당신 like I hate life;
But 사랑 is what cuts like a knife.

사랑 is death;and death is you
Its pain stains like a black tattoo.
Those memories come back again
And bind me in the ropes of pain.

Crimson blood streams down my head,
like a long, silk ribbon, tied 의해 a thread.
To a platimum bullet hole in my skull..

Now just a memory thats faded and dull

Thankyou, for 읽기 this poem and encouraging me to go further.

Dont forget to add me as a 팬 if 당신 like it :P




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thanks guys
zerg1994 posted over a year ago
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omg amazing
Paramore-CSI posted over a year ago
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Wow very nice
Hidanfan posted over a year ago
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AWESOME
NERO1186 posted over a year ago
 zerg1994 posted over a year ago
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Frizzhead said:
I 사랑 the originality and feeling in this. It is one of a kind
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posted over a year ago 
greeneyedvamp said:
OMG!! 당신 have such talent. i can feel your pain. wow. o am in shock right now. what 당신 said is so deep. i would 사랑 to hear 더 많이 if 당신 dont mind sharing.
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MrsPattinsonXO said:
I like it. XX
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Little_Cullen said:
Me too. Very passionate.
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Rockgrl said:
you've out done yourself again
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lilred96 said:
awsome
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GWENxTRENT said:
i like it! i fell that way sometimes...
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Mallory101 said:
Hey! 당신 copied my poem!
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dude he did copie your poem
lilred96 posted over a year ago
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Yeah !
Mallory101 posted over a year ago
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