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posted by Edward901
nobody understands love,
nobody really believes.
당신 can't put a price on the way people make 당신 feel,
but 당신 can always say:
i 사랑 you
but what does it really mean?
those three small words?
to many people it's just
i care about you
isn't that easier to say
than make someone believe
you'll always be there for them
that they are the sun, the moon, the stars
that they will be the person that 당신 want to be the last person to see before 당신 die?
is it so hard to NOT make someone believe
that 당신 will always be there for them
that 당신 will be the one that they need
for life
for eternity
forever?
다음 time 당신 say
i 사랑 you
mean it
because if 당신 don't
your just hurting yourself
and the person that 당신 say it to
posted by Edward901
this will be the last chapter i post... the rest you'll have to read in the published book when it's done being written and comes out



Music was playing when I could feel again. Abigail was lying on my 침대 with me, playing with my hair.
    “Bobby will be 집 in two hours. I called him when 당신 stopped responding to me.” I recognized the song, it was Bobby's favorite. He had told me that I was who it reminded him of.
    I looked away from Abby, ashamed. “I can't believe how selfish I am. He was finally where he wanted to be and I dragged him away...
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posted by 천사
the time we have is so very precious...
당신 can blink 또는 turn and it is like a whole lifetime has passed
a fiend whom has helped me in so many ways has, in a blink of an eye it seems
has gotten older and i have trouble seeing that time has passed so quick
even now the newer 프렌즈 and family it seems change in a blink
당신 are left wondering where was i when did all of this change........
in the 일 to 일 routines of life sometimes 당신 can forget how precious life, friends, family, even your pets, and just people 당신 meet can just be so different; the 다음 time 당신 really take the time to...
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posted by elanor260
I wrote this a few months ago. Any feedback is greatly appreciated!

Black Roses

At the end of the day, the sun slowly set, painting the sky in a brilliant 무지개, 레인 보우 of colors. She looked across the golden field, staring at the horizon. Her expression was that of one who is looking for something, but cannot figure out quite what. A slight breeze stirred the tall grass, creating the semblance of waves. Her hair moved slightly as she looked down at her lap, and the three black 장미 that lay upon it.

The 장미 meant something, of that she was certain, but she did not remember, not yet. It had been...
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This is a poem I wrote today, 7 May 2008. Feedback/analysis is welcome.

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My eyes have been thirsting for you
These long lonely years
My ears have strained to hear your voice
The boy's enthusiasm for his lover
Has not sagged but rather swelled
With deprivation

Memory paints you
Perfect in wit, charm
Desire

Today I saw 당신 briefly, from afar
I had to avert my eyes
Lest I be consumed
My ears heard your distant laughter
Through all the other noise
In that crowded place

I know that memory lies
But still I shivered
With longing and remorse

Today I also heard of the other man
Now in your life
Somewhere...
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So one may 또는 may not recall that a few months ago, I 게시됨 link that I wrote in my high school years and my freshman 년 of college. The purpose of this was to compare it to the work I was required to do in my 시 class (a pre-req for the creative 글쓰기 track of the English major). Since I recently discovered that I was accepted to the track (yay for me!), I decided it was time to post the results of that 시 class to compare to my other poems.

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sapling

fingers curl like dead leaves and grip a
fleshy branch which tickles

lines of stories etched in arching
looping whorls rub against...
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posted by Edward901
Rulers of Darkness

Hunting. The best word in a vampire's vocabulary.
    “Ready?” Abby asked me expectantly.
    “Ready.”
    Our eyes dilated and all of our senses were down. I crouched low,listening, the world no longer had any secrets. Wind rustled leaves, a storm was coming in a couple of days. A deer grazed peacefully, not what I wanted. Abby attacked a grizzly. Nope. Finally, I heard it. A pack of gray wolves.
    Wolves were my 가장 좋아하는 drink. They always hunted in a pack, a canine family. Something that...
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posted by Edward901
this is part of my book that i wrote... tell me how it is...

Rulers of Darkness

I sat there, watching, waiting, listening for the sound of Abigail calling me. She didn't, she just stood outside my door letting me cool off.
I smiled, I'd wait for her to decide to talk to me, patience was one of my best abilities. Of course, I had to learn patience while others were 초 nature, but time had perfected it.
Abby waited, but her toes tapped impatiently on the other side of the door. I heard her sigh and knew I had won.
An involuntary victory smile formed on my face as the door knob turned....
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posted by Cinders
Preface: I wrote this in tenth grade, when I was sixteen. So it was about four years ago... Comparing it to link which was written four weeks ago, it's interesting to see the changes in those four years. I would 사랑 to discuss that. I've updated it for Fanpop, editing and tweaking it from the original which can be found link.



It was probably nothing different to little Ellen, munching ever so innocently on a good-tasting set of keys in the corner, surrounded 의해 blocks and the spilt contents of her poor mother’s purse. Mrs. Shaw had neglected to put the 지갑 out of her dear child’s...
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posted by animelove30
    Butterfly

    A beautiful creature up in the air.
Up above, way up there. Floating around without a care. Through the clouds, over the rainbow. The people stop and stare, it’s just too rare. Above the earth’s surface, flying with the breeze. Gliding through the sky with special ease.     The children wave as she flies by. Up, Up, Up, and higher in the sky. She hovers over the grasslands, and above the sea, how happy this 나비 has to be. She flies over Africa, Europe, and Asia too, everywhere the skies are blue. She never...
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posted by HaleyDewit
Got no reason to cry
I’m okay
Got no reason to hide
I’m okay
Got no reason to run from life
Or to fake a smile
Everything’s perfect this way
I’m okay

Bury me while I’m still breathing
Haunt me while I’m still sleeping
Torture me while I’m still feeling
Everything’s perfect this way
I’m okay


Got no place to run to
But I’m okay
Got no heaven to go through
Still I’m okay
Got no idea what to do
Or how to live without you
But everything’s perfect this way
I’m okay

Bury me while I’m still breathing
Haunt me while I’m still sleeping
Torture me while I’m still feeling
Everything’s perfect...
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posted by HaleyDewit
Frustration is causing me to pull my hair out
Desperation is causing me to cry my 심장 out
Imagination has caused my head into the clouds
But realization has caused me to tumble down

Of all the guys I got to know you’re the one I will remember
And I won’t shed a tear, but inside I’ll cry a river

I’m falling back down to earth
My feet steady on the ground
If anything I’ve learned from love
It’s 당신 get 로스트 but never found
Broken down from these emotions
I realize how unfair life is
Still I can’t stop believing
There’s gotta be 더 많이 than this


Acting like a 암캐, 암 캐 I abreact on my friends
Hoping...
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posted by HaleyDewit
When 당신 read this
I’ll be gone
Though I never said I 사랑 you
I wrote it in many 사랑 songs
All I ever wanted was to be with you
But I guess it was asked too much
Now all I want to do is run away
‘Cause I’ve had enough

I wanna let go
But my hands are tied on you
I wanna walk away
But my feet refuse to move
I’m 사랑 struck, 당신 got me completely
And now we’ll never know what might have been


Don’t feel sorry
I’m the one to blame
I shouldn’t have been so damn gutless
And told 당신 straight away
But I guess it’s not very convenient
When you’re living miles apart
Though I know physical distance
Doesn’t...
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Have 당신 ever had a dream? I have. My name is Isabella, but 당신 could call me Izzie. I have 6 siblings, 5 brothers, 1 sister. I can not work out in the field. This is 1859 us as women, we have no rights. My dad was a sailor. He was striped of commanding his ship. I was only 5 when that happened, now I'm 16 the oldest in the house, and I still get no respect! But anyway, my dad smuggled slaves into the north. Well, my dream was to be a carpenter. When I told my dad my dad he said "Psh! A carpenter! Thats a job for a man, not a skinny girl like you!" That made me furious!
"OHHHHHHHHH! Izzie's...
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posted by HouseMindFreak
A story I am 글쓰기 about a American Indian boy of the Comanche tribe in Texas. He his cursed with a 수퍼내츄럴 evil but will have to confront his demon and the master of the 언더월드 realm which has plans for his curse...

Hell’s Outlaw

Chapter 1

In the town of Big Spring, Texas, a 12 년 old Comanche Indian boy named Koda awoke that Saturday morning with a feeling of dread and excitement.
As with any boy approaching their 13th birthday in his tribe, he was to prepare for his spiritual quest but unlike the others before him, he did not look 앞으로 to it.
He has spent many arguments with...
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added by fancifulgoddess
posted by hakadoshi12345
TURN BACK NOW IF 당신 DON'T LIKE INUYASHA!
(ME:*gulp* I don't wanna!
KYO:*whatching with interest*
INU'S CREATER:Have to!
ME:No!
INU:*unsheaths Tetsiuga* SAY IT!
ME:O.O "!"
INU:what?
ME:I don't...own Inu 또는 other characters 또는 his cute ears *touches inu's ears*
INU:*hurts me badly*
ME:i do how ever own Aiko,Kyo,Iuana,and Kiana!SO HA!Owwwwww!)
_______________________________________

KIANA:Iuana!Iuana!

*in the goshinbaku*

IAUNA:haha!
aiko:haha shhhhhhh.
*voices in the backround*

(on hold sorry)
posted by appleco
The Mona Lisa

The Mona Lisa is one of the worlds most famous art pieces but at one point it was stolen 의해 a man who thought that Italian paintings should be shown in Italy and not France so… when he was all alone in the room where the Mona Lisa was so he took the painting and stuffed it under his smock. It took a week for the museum to find out that the painting had gone missing. I think that ever since this painting went missing museums have 더 많이 security then they did then to protect 더 많이 thefts.
I think that this connects to chasing Vermeer because “the lady writing” it on the go and Calder and Petra think that it is not 안전한, 안전 just like how the Mona Lisa wasn’t 안전한, 안전 in the museum in France. I think that defiantly Calder and Petra would be helpful.
added by HuddyBrave
Source: me
posted by HaleyDewit
Save me from my misery
This pain’s too much to bear
My world’s become too dark to see
And I can’t get no air
Grasping for a straw of hope
Trying so hard to survive
But the pain that has crept into me
Is killing me inside

And now I’m crying
I’m dying
Won’t make it out alive
I’m breaking
And aching
Won’t get up this time around
Every 일 is torture
And I’ve just had enough
If I had a humanity switch
I would turn it off, off, off
I would turn it off, off, off
Turn it off, off, off
Turn it off


As everyone is moving on
My world seems to stand still
I keep going back and forth
To what was and will never...
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