Castle- S05E05 - 사진

I decided to make my first 팬 fiction about 성 and Beckett so constructive criticism is appreciated. Please comment.




"It's getting late, we should sleep on it." 성 said looking at his watch.
Beckett looked up from the papers she was reading.
"Separately!" 성 stammered quickly.
Beckett lowered her eyes to the floor.
"Katherine Beckett, I never..." 성 whispered as he headed for the door.
"Well, why not, Castle? Am I not attractive enough for you?"
"No." 성 said turning around.
Beckett got up from her chair and walked over to Castle. "Then what is it? Don't 당신 sleep with...