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Windwakerguy430 posted on May 18, 2015 at 03:18AM
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over a year ago Windwakerguy430 said…
(Okay. But, I'll need a break. I only make one WYT a day. We'll work on the next review tomorrow, if it's fine with you)
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over a year ago Canada24 said…
(okay.. Fair enough)
over a year ago Windwakerguy430 said…
(Okay, we can work on it now)
over a year ago Canada24 said…
(Sure, though I am at work, so won't be on as much)
over a year ago Windwakerguy430 said…
(Its fine. perfectly understandable. So, I believe we were going to work on Cheerilee's Garden, right?)
over a year ago Canada24 said…
(that's the one)
over a year ago Windwakerguy430 said…
(Okay. Since you know about it more, you can be the lead critic for this one)
over a year ago Canada24 said…
(okay)
over a year ago Windwakerguy430 said…
Hey, guys. Canada's back. I got rid of him, but he came back. Like a goddamn boomerang
over a year ago Canada24 said…
Not sure if I'm a demon or a cockroach... Maybe both
over a year ago Windwakerguy430 said…
Anyway, he came at me with a fanfic that he wanted us to review. A fanfic known as Cheerliee's Garden. Now, you all may remember that I already reviewed this fanfic a whole year ago. So, why did I decide to review it again. Because, one thing I noticed about this fanfic... It sucks... I mean, it REALLY sucks
over a year ago Canada24 said…
You did?
over a year ago Windwakerguy430 said…
Yeah, but, that was back when I thought that just thought making a one minute review for a 6 hour fanfic was okay... It's not
over a year ago Canada24 said…
Ohh.
over a year ago Windwakerguy430 said…
But yeah, this fanfic sucks. So, Canada, if you will, tell the good people out there what makes this fanfic suck
over a year ago Canada24 said…
Well.. My first impression, is that its a Saw rip off
over a year ago Windwakerguy430 said…
Really? How so
over a year ago Canada24 said…
Well.. Each kill is done by Jigsaw like tortures.... Except, theirs no chance of person serviving, witch is the POINT of Jigsaw traps
over a year ago Windwakerguy430 said…
Yeah. This fanfic is more less like Saw and more like Hostile and my eyes. It's gruesome, but uninteresting, yet sadly gets more praise then true good work (Seriously, Saw has 44% on Rotten Tomatoes while Hostile has 74%. WHAT THE FUCK)
over a year ago Canada24 said…
The whole story is pretty dull..
In the begining. Cheerlee clearly hates childrun.
But instead of making the "rational" decision of simply finding a new job., she believes all the childrun must die, simply cause she sees them as weeds..
over a year ago Windwakerguy430 said…
Yeah, I'm gonna need a certain type of weed to get passed this crap (Windwakerguy430 does not condone the usage of any illegal materials such as marijuana)
Canada24 commented…
Even though he finds it extermely fun over a year ago
over a year ago Canada24 said…
Yeah.. So, during a school play, she one by one sends them down a trap door to their unique deaths.. And of coarse... Little Scooty is first. And she (rather dramatically) gets locked in a cage that shrinks and slowly crushes her to death
over a year ago Windwakerguy430 said…
Here's the thing.... How the fuck can a cage shrink. Is it some kind of cage that just shrinks at random, or is the writer just pulling random crap like this out of his Wonderful Bag of Stupid Shit
over a year ago Canada24 said…
Wait, I think it had spikes above it actually
over a year ago Windwakerguy430 said…
SPIKES! IN A FUCKING CAGE! First off, what kind of fucked up cage has spikes, especially int his day and age. Secondly, How in the fuck did Cheerilee carry that fucking thing into the basement, as well as not being caught with it. It makes no sense
over a year ago Canada24 said…
It's been a while since I read it, so don't remember every detail
over a year ago Windwakerguy430 said…
Okay. So, what next
over a year ago Canada24 said…
Well.. Sadly, thats only the begining of the twisted deaths, and they only get worse
over a year ago Windwakerguy430 said…
Now, when you say worse, do you mean they are more violent or more half assed in ideas
over a year ago Canada24 said…
Sweetie Belle gets that old medieval torture "Dungeon of the Rats"..
Were the said victim is trapped in a cage or something, and rabid rats get tossed in and eat her alive, and she can do nothing to stop it
over a year ago Windwakerguy430 said…
Okay, now how the fuck did Cheerilee get the rats, and how the fuckl did she not get noticed for carrying fucking rats. What's next, a bunch of acid?
over a year ago Canada24 said…
Probably.. I mean, shes just doing anything she can to make them suffer more then they deserve to be
over a year ago Windwakerguy430 said…
Thats just stupid. If you want to kill them, THEN FUCKING KILL THEM! It's not rocket science. Hell, I wouldn't be surprised if she killed them in a stupid fucking way. What's next, exactly?
over a year ago Canada24 said…
She dose kill them.. But makes them suffer, because kids TOTALLY deserve to suffer
over a year ago Windwakerguy430 said…
That's really stupid, if you ask me
over a year ago Canada24 said…
The next part makes me.. Can't believe I'm saying this.. Feel bad for Silver spoon
over a year ago Windwakerguy430 said…
That's something I thought no one would ever say. So, what happens
over a year ago Canada24 said…
Well.. It's either Diamon takes a needle to an eye or Diamond gets something 50 times worse. And Diamond screams at Spoon to hurry up and do it, because shes so selfish
over a year ago Windwakerguy430 said…
Man, even in utter danger, she's still a bitch
over a year ago Canada24 said…
Yeah..
over a year ago Windwakerguy430 said…
Okay, so, once her eye is gone, what happens next
over a year ago Canada24 said…
I think they died anyway... (witch TOTALLY hasn't been done in one of the saw films)
over a year ago Windwakerguy430 said…
Yeah, I thought so. How did she kill them this time. Did she have rabid wolves devour them- No wait, perhaps she had them impaled. Or, better yet, she stuck them in a cage and waited for starvation. Am I right, because by this point, it isn't fucking surprising
over a year ago Canada24 said…
like in Saw.. The they would of died, regardless of doing what was asked of them.. Because it was jigsaw COPYCAT.. anyway. Can't say I remember
over a year ago Windwakerguy430 said…
You can't remember, yet you still felt it was necessary to make this review? .... Why did I ever invite you over?
over a year ago Canada24 said…
I remember the story.. Just not little details
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over a year ago Windwakerguy430 said…
Little.. You call that LITTLE! For all we know, it could have been something important to the plot.... Though, probably not
over a year ago Canada24 said…
Fine.. Diamond Tiera gets that horrible horrible painful (unseen) death, despite the fact Silver Spoon stabbed her own eyeball to prevent this
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over a year ago Windwakerguy430 said…
Well, that sucks. Anyway, I think we've said those two's names more than either of us would have prefered, so, we'll just say that Cheerilee lied, killed both of them, and move this trainwreck along... into a fucking tree.
over a year ago Canada24 said…
But you got mad at me when I tried doing that earlier, by claiming I didn't remember
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