Hey everyone. Im an animator from the UK and ive written a short story which is about to become an animation. The script has taken inspiration from the style of Arrested Development and i would really appreciate some feedback. I have a video of a animated storyboard for you guys to watch.

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Any thoughts or opinions would be great, even if its just "i can see the similarities" or "maybe it could be more like this..."

Thanks very much.