Is my writing, crappy 또는 good?

IT'S AWESOME!!! I 사랑 IT AND 당신 SHOULD TOTALLY KEEP AT IT!!!

Exacly redhawks

i think it is good, although it's a little fast-paced. if 당신 could just 옮기기 a little slower, talk 더 많이 about the setting and what the characters are thinking more, and just let their personalities not be just really good, but totally perfect and shining, it would be great. but, i 사랑 your writing. as 당신 go on, it just get's better. keep writing. when your finished, i would add/delete some stuff, and possibly send it to rick riordan himself, ask if it's all right to use the characters. then, try publishing it.

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