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The critic game!

ok! so here it goes:
post a picture 당신 drew and the person below 당신 will give 당신 a critic on your art
also if you'd be so kind could 당신 also give me a critic id 사랑 it and i will also critic 당신 as well
so have fun and learn!

사랑 your artstyle. It's really unique. Great job!

msbass posted over a year ago

oh thank 당신 so much!

smartone123 posted over a year ago

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what do 당신 mean could use some work?like whats wrong?

smartone123 posted over a year ago

smartone123 posted over a year ago

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ShiraKishi said:

For this drawing,40/100? Maybe,right?

posted over a year ago

um did 당신 read the rules? your suppose to critic it and also post a peice 당신 did yourself so some else can critic it

smartone123 posted over a year ago

I see.Sorry

ShiraKishi posted over a year ago

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Read your 프로필 wall,is written clearly there.Thanks for your feedback.

ShiraKishi posted over a year ago

dontmindmeyo said:

Yours is gorgeous! I absolutely 사랑 your colouring/shading style! Only thing that feels a bit off is the way the neck is bent. I don't really know how to explain it, but it's not anything major. Everything else looks awesome though.

meh
im not the best artist out there but 저기요 ive really improved from when i first started so i guess i'll post
yeah she's not really an 아니메 character but and the quality is kind of :/ but

posted over a year ago

thank 당신 very much XD yours is cute the bodies proportions are good but the shoulders are abit weird and the clothes lack movement and wrinkles.Also shading would be good.work on those and it would help 당신 alot XD

smartone123 posted over a year ago

msbass said:

My drawing of Gilbert ^.^

posted over a year ago

the lines are clean,the 색깔 are nice and the drawing is well put so nice work there.Though this isnt a original drawing its a copy right,if not then nice work and the only other thing i think it would need is fundamental shadows at the least.Overall nice work just fix the shaodw problem and experiment with your own sstyle if 당신 want to improve as an artist

smartone123 posted over a year ago

Thank 당신 a lot for your kind critique. I understand what 당신 mean about the shadowing. This drawing indeed does not have the greatest shadowing but it is a lot better when seeing it on the actual paper. My scanner couldn't clearly bring out the little shadowing I had used. :/ But again thanks a lot about your kind words ^.^ And ofc I will try to improve my skills!

msbass posted over a year ago

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@SketchWreckThank 당신 so much for your kind critique; I understand about the problem with the shadowing...it was better on paper but my scanner messed it up a little, 다음 time I will make it 더 많이 intense...

msbass posted over a year ago

SketchWreck said:

So here's mine! ^^

The one on the left is Light and the one on the right is L, both from Death Note. :))

posted over a year ago

Srry If it's too fresh. This was a fanservice drawing >/////< but still, im very proud of it and it's one of my best works. :))

SketchWreck posted over a year ago

its pretty good man! the body movements have ife and the clothes have good wrinkles and the shadows are nice.I think the neck and chins is what id work on but since its 아니메 its forgivable.Nice work always improve man XD also i 사랑 엘

smartone123 posted over a year ago

I 사랑 the movement of both Light and L~ Great job on that. 당신 could work a little bit 더 많이 on making the line work cearer. But definately the drawing is pretty good~

msbass posted over a year ago

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